From the begining, it's required bring down all the myths around sexuality. All the enquires that has begun since very young should have a response from a reliable source (public politics to the educative system) and not a doubtful website or a moralist answer,; of course,huge challenge for a country like Chile. The unplanned pregnancies, it's a really complicated topic, especially for the teenagers. In our country, the 50% of the pregnancy are unplanned, the numbers speak for themselves about the failures of sexual education. In addition, learning and teaching more about preventive method is the only way to improve like a country and fight against sexual disease. In conclusion, is totally necessary stated to talk about sexual education and find solutions to this big social issue.
ResponderBorrarVery good blog. It is quite relevant what you mention, many of the teenage pregnancies generates that there are circles of poverty in those families. The above because there is no continuity of studies that allows better job opportunities. It is expected that the authorities will promote education on these issues, which are not sufficiently valued by our current conservative society.
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Cayetana,
ResponderBorrarWhat is your TS?[From the begining,] it's [required] NECESSARY? TO bring down all the myths around sexuality.
SS1: All the enquires that [has begun] BEGIN since CHILDREN Are very young should have a response from a reliable source (public politCIES[ics] [to] FROM the educatiONAL[ve] system) and not a doubtful website or a moralist answer[,;??]
COMMENT: of course,A huge challenge for a country like Chile.
[The] SS1?: unplanned pregnancies, it's a really complicated topic, especially for the teenagers. In our country, [the] 50% of [the] pregnancIES[y] are unplanned, the numbers speak for themselves about the failures of sexual education.
EXP: In addition, learning and teaching more about preventive methodS is the only way to improve [like] AS a country and fight against sexual disease.
C: In conclusion, IT is totally necessary [stated] TO START to talk about sexual education and find solutions to this big social issue.
Cayetana,
Your structure was confusing and your grammar not the best ever. You didn't pay attention to punctuation either.