Hello GeoBloger!!
What a nice day to write about something really distant for me at this moment… holidays.
I would like to write about my
best holiday ever. This 2016 summer, I went with my friend to the south of
Chile backpacking for one month, we’ve always traveled together and this year
couldn’t be the exception.
It was a looong trip -therefore we saw lot’s of places- but I want to tell u about one place in specific. This spot is a beautiful lake called Risopatrón, near the Queulat National Park, in Aysén region.
It was a looong trip -therefore we saw lot’s of places- but I want to tell u about one place in specific. This spot is a beautiful lake called Risopatrón, near the Queulat National Park, in Aysén region.
A truck left us on the road really close to the lake. We started walking between giant Nalcas towards the lake… and there it was, a beautiful quiet lagoon surrounded by native forest.
The most beautiful episode I’ve seen was one afternoon, I was walking on the shores of the lake, and suddenly many birds began to play each other and with the water.
Risopatrón was a kind of milestone in the trip, maybe because we started to feel the real connection with the place and nature, enjoying the company and starting the adventure. That’s why this vacation was my favorite one…at least for now.
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WOw, that was so great vacation. I amused myself pretty reading. In my opinion, you write very clearly. Great story.
ResponderBorrarSee you
I would like to write about my best holiday ever. TS
ResponderBorrarThis 2016 summer, I went with my friend to the south of Chile backpacking for one month, we’ve always traveled together and this year couldn’t be the exception. SS1
It was a looong trip -therefore we saw lot’s of places- but I want to tell u about one place in specific. SS2
This spot is a beautiful lake called Risopatrón, near the Queulat National Park, in Aysén region.
EXAMPLE
A truck left us on the road really close to the lake. SS3
We started walking between giant Nalcas towards the lake… and there it was, a beautiful quiet lagoon surrounded by native forest. DESCRIPTION
The most beautiful episode I’ve seen was one afternoon, I was walking on the shores of the lake, and suddenly many birds began to play each WITH other and with the water.SS4
Risopatrón was a kind of milestone in the trip, SS5 maybe because we started to feel the real connection with the place and nature, enjoying the company and starting the adventure. EXPLANATION
That’s why this vacation was my favorite one…at least for now. CONCLUDING SENTENCE
Cayetana,
Nice writing. You shouldn’t write 6 paragraphs when you were asked to write only one!! 1-line paragraphs are not ok for this exercise. That’s the only problem with your text, please, DO NOT separate it like this in the future. You used an appropriate structure; your paragraph is easy to read. Pay a bit more attention to the EXAMPLE-EXPLANATION-DESCRIPTION part. Cheers!